Lauren Dodds on the peer evaluation

Dana evaluated my paper. She told me that the way I fixed my thesis worked and helped to make my argument consistent throughout the paper. She thought my third paragraph was addressing two different point and that it might work better to split the paragraph up, and so I split it up and expanded on both aspects. She thought that my last point, arguing that men aren't monogamous anyway, needed a lot of work. It was a difficult point to argue and I wasn't convincing her yet. She also gave me an idea for a counter argument and a rebuttal but I decided to go in a different direction with that.