Chris Gorham
Seminar in English Composition
Dr. Adam Johns
15 October 2008
Flow: An Everlasting Meaning
It is evident through “Jimmy Corrigan” that times have changed. No longer do we live in an ideal society filled with tranquil harmony in our communities, or more importantly, our families. Jimmy’s depressed and meaningless life is the result of an absent collectiveness, especially within the family. It is argued that the lack of collectiveness within our community and family lives is taking away from the meaning of life altogether. Regardless of this lacking collectiveness, however, I believe that it is impossible to lose self meaning altogether. Our meaning as humans is not based on others, rather on the activities we engage ourselves in that take us away from reality.
In Bill Mckibbens book, “Enough”, the term “flow” is used frequently. It is meant to describe some activity in which we are so involved with that nothing else matters. For example, artists who have a love for painting become honed in on their work so much so that their troubles around them are disregarded. In “Enough”, Csikszentmihaly is quoted, ”You are so involved in what you are doing that you aren’t thinking of yourself as separate from that immediate activity.” (Mckibben 52) Mckibben goes on to say that, “forgetting the self seems to be a key part of falling into the flow.” (Mcibben 52) The state we fall in when reaching this flow gives us some kind of meaning. It sets us apart from others by differentiating our outlets of everyday stresses.
In relation to Jimmy Corrigan, Jimmy’s life is full of a different kind of flow. It is not a flow that is represented through sports or art; rather it is reached through his highly complex imagination. Jimmy uses his imagination to cope with his broken family and because society sees him as a failure. One prime example of this is on page 36 when Jimmy imagines brutally killing his father. Jimmy imagines this brutal act because his father has not been around his whole life which gives Jimmy the opportunity to escape the emptiness of his life in a different way. Another example of Jimmy’s imagination fulfilling the emptiness of his life is on page 12 when he imagines himself with Peggy by a fire discussing peach groves, when in reality Jimmy’s relationship with Peggy is quite the opposite. Peggy has little interest in Jimmy, and only seeing him as someone to deliver mail to. However, Jimmy’s imagination gives him the chance to imagine his life in a way that gives him pleasure and satisfaction.
Flow, regardless of how it is attained gives us all a way to separate ourselves from the troubles we face. We gather meaning from this activity because it is different for each and every person. Jimmy may not be the only person who copes through imagining something better; however, he is the only person who copes through his own imagination. No one can see through his eyes and this is what sets him apart from others, giving him a meaning.
Society’s continuing loss of collectiveness within the community and family has made the stressors of life more difficult and strenuous. Many believe that these increase difficulties within our lives have caused and will continue to cause the deterioration of the meaning humans hold for themselves. This meaning is not controlled by what life brings at us, but rather how we cope with it. Many, including Jimmy Corrigan, resort to activities that separate them from reality. This flow activity where we reach complete separation is what gives us our meaning. It is how we can separate ourselves from one another regardless of how much stress or difficulty we endure. Society maybe becoming more individualistic nature, but as long as we hold on to what makes us free from it all, we will always have a meaning.
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I like how in your first paragraph you have a distinct thesis that you stick to throughout the paper. This always helps to make a good paper. In this paragraph you may want to expand on your ideas in a little more detail. As of now it is somewhat general.
Your second paragraph is a good transition from your thesis, making it even more specific. My one suggestion for this paragraph is to add some more of your own ideas to the writings of McKibben.
In paragraph 3 I like how you explain that Jimmy escapes "the emptiness of his life" through his imagination. Again maybe you could add a little more of your ideas to the ideas of Ware.
Your fourth paragraph kind of seems like it was just information that you wanted to put into your paper, but didn't know where to put it. Maybe you could add a real-life situation or personal anecdote relating to "flow"
Your conclusion closes your paper well and really brings everything together.
Chris Gorham
Seminar in Eng./Comp.
Dr. Adam Johns
19 October 2008
Flow: An Everlasting Meaning
It is evident through “Jimmy Corrigan” that times have changed. No longer do we live in an ideal society filled with tranquil harmony in our communities, or more importantly, our families. Jimmy’s depressed and meaningless life is the result of an absent collectiveness, especially within the family. It is argued that the lack of collectiveness within our community and family lives is taking away from the meaning of life altogether. Regardless of this lacking collectiveness, however, I believe that it is impossible to lose self meaning altogether. Our meaning as humans is not based on others, rather on the activities we engage ourselves in that take us away from reality. Whether it be running, swimming, or playing chess, it makes no difference. The way that we become a part of these activities to be removed from the reality of life is what gives each and every one some meaning, some aspect of ourselves that separates us from the next person.
In Bill Mckibbens book, “Enough”, the term “flow” is used frequently. It is meant to describe some activity in which we are so involved with that nothing else matters. For example, artists who have a love for painting become honed in on their work so much so that their troubles around them are disregarded. In “Enough”, Csikszentmihaly is quoted, ”You are so involved in what you are doing that you aren’t thinking of yourself as separate from that immediate activity.” (Mckibben 52) Mckibben goes on to say that, “forgetting the self seems to be a key part of falling into the flow.” (Mcibben 52) When engaging in these types of activities, we become one with that activity. Everything we do complements that activity and nothing can interrupt that bond. This bond between person and activity is different for everyone, regardless if it is the same activity. The satisfaction we attain from reaching this sense of flow and releasing our stresses of reality make us different from everyone else.
In relation to Jimmy Corrigan, Jimmy’s life is full of a different kind of flow. It is not a flow that is represented through sports or art; rather it is reached through his highly complex imagination. Jimmy uses his imagination to cope with his broken family and because society sees him as a failure. One prime example of this is on page 36 when Jimmy imagines brutally killing his father. Jimmy imagines this brutal act because his father has not been around his whole life which gives Jimmy the opportunity to escape the emptiness of his life in a different way. Another example of Jimmy’s imagination fulfilling the emptiness of his life is on page 12 when he imagines himself with Peggy by a fire discussing peach groves, when in reality Jimmy’s relationship with Peggy is quite the opposite. Peggy has little interest in Jimmy, and only seeing him as someone to deliver mail to. However, Jimmy’s imagination gives him the chance to imagine his life in a way that gives him pleasure and satisfaction. Jimmy’s imagination also gives him a chance to release some of the stress built up within him from living an empty life.
Flow, regardless of how it is attained gives us all a way to separate ourselves from the troubles we face. We gather meaning from this activity because it is different for each and every person. Jimmy may not be the only person who copes through imagining something better; however, he is the only person who copes through his own imagination. No one can see through his eyes and this is what sets him apart from others, giving him a meaning. Personally, playing lacrosse gives me that sense of flow. Seeing the attack men come down the field trying to score on me takes my mind away from everything except concentrating on that little white ball. I know that I’m not the only one that gets this sense of satisfaction when playing lacrosse, however, I do know that no one else can attain the same feeling that I feel when doing something that not only I enjoy, but also takes me away from reality for a brief sixty minutes. Jimmy Corrigan, when using his vivid imagination, attains the same feeling of satisfaction and relief from being removed from reality for even a brief amount of time.
Society’s continuing loss of collectiveness within the community and family has made the stressors of life more difficult and strenuous. Many believe that these increase difficulties within our lives have caused and will continue to cause the deterioration of the meaning humans hold for themselves. This meaning is not controlled by what life brings at us, but rather how we cope with it. Many, including Jimmy Corrigan, resort to activities that separate them from reality. This flow activity where we reach complete separation is what gives us our meaning. It is how we can separate ourselves from one another regardless of how much stress or difficulty we endure. Society maybe becoming more individualistic nature, but as long as we hold on to what makes us free from it all, we will always have a meaning.
Colin - You offer some nice details. Ideally, I would have liked to see a little more in the way of *suggestions*.
Chris - Your opening seems lame - it's a hopelessly large generalization. It gets interesting, though, when you immediately shift into a *defense* of individualism.
It's fascinating that you want to defend Jimmy as being, if not healthy, then much healthier than we probably understand. I like the idea, but would have liked to see it extended.
It's a fascinating approach; for it to be completely convincing, though, I think you badly needed to deal with Jimmy's fantasy life in more detail, and to defend the uglier or weirder parts of it (the fantasy of nuclear warfare followed by marrying Amy; the robot dream, etc).
Great idea, incomplete and even mediocre execution.
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