Wednesday, October 15, 2008

Meaningless Life

Nick Lubic
Dr. Adam Johns
Seminar in Composition
14 October 2008

Human Meaning

A famous US cartoonist, Charles Schulz, once said, “My life has no purpose, no direction, no aim, no meaning, and yet I'm happy. I can't figure it out. What am I doing right?”. What Schulz means when he says this is that even though he is not getting very much accomplished and seems to be meaninglessly leading his life, he is still content. This individualized idea is a common thought in today’s society more specifically the youth. Many think that it is fine to live a meaningless existence, as long as they are happy. Bill McKibben introduces his opinion on this subject in his book, Enough. He believes today’s youth are more self centered and less communicable then the generations before them. Perhaps, I believe, technology has increase this distance between an individual and his community. Either way, I agree that modern society has lost the sense of meaning and community it once flourished in.

One way that it has done this is through the advancements in technology. McKibben would agree with me in saying life before such advancement as telephones and computers was much more sociable. Although it is now much easier to communicate with the use of this technology, the “quality” of the communication is suffering. For instance, the house visits of the 1920’s are long gone, as people would much rather call someone on the phone than meet with them face to face. The modern man is more prone to staying indoors in solitude watching TV, hindering his ability to find meaning in his life and to communicate with his peers. This is an unacceptable loss. Without these basic interactions, we have eliminated the very meaning of what it is to be human. It is our ability to communicate that separates us from all other species on earth. Of course, it would be ridiculous to propose eliminating these technologies, as they have provided us with immense opportunities and are a tribute to advancements in the past. Keeping intact the most basic modes of communication and interactions with our community is key in giving modern society a chance at finding meaning.

Chris Ware incorporates this meaninglessness in his graphic book, “Jimmy Corrigan”. The premise of the comic deals with the absurdly meaningless life of Jimmy Corrigan. Ware uses his life as a metaphor for the corruption of modern society and the meaninglessness of it. Throughout the comic, Jimmy is continually isolated from those around him, only truly communicating with his mother via the telephone. Not only that, Jimmy seems almost incapable of deriving his own opinion, adding to his overall hollowness. Ware often hints to modern society’s selfishness. He uses a conversation between Jimmy and a strange old man in the airport to display this. A newspaper displays several articles, the main headline reads “Superman leaps to death” followed by an earthquake in China that killed 3 Americans, along with 4,000 Chinese. The man says, “4,000 Chinese people die in an earthquake but the headline tells us that three of our brave soldiers cap it instead. Nothing wrong with that though, right? … we’d rather read about some guy in panties falling off a building” (Ware 32). This passage is trying to explain to the reader we as Americans are concerned more with ourselves than with humanity overall. Ware is using this old man to portray his view, which is that society is becoming more individualized and less in touch with the community as a whole. He emphasizes that this way of thought is corrupting human meaning.

Ware also uses Jimmy as a character to symbolize this continuing cycle of meaninglessness. Like I mentioned before, Jimmy often has trouble formulating his own opinions. For instance, Jimmy has a conversation with a man named Jack at work. Jack tries to give Jimmy “advice” to help his relationship with women. Jack states, “Chicks don’t dig guys that are nice… Plus, you can’t ever let a chick know you like her until you have sex with her anyway” (Ware 14). Ware uses Jack, who cares only about his feelings, as a way of displaying selfishness, adding to the lack of community the author is getting at. In this case, Jimmy just sits and listens to the terrible advice Jack is giving him, displaying his lack of opinion and meaninglessness. It seems as if Jimmy Corrigan is either in a state of complete boredom or absolute panic, which inhibits his ability to communicate. This idea can be connected back to McKibben, when he mentions Csikszentmihalyi’s notion of “flow”. He defines flow as the area between boredom and anxiety in which we can all find meaning. Jimmy lacks this area of emotion and because of it, symbolizes loss of meaning in every sense.

It is easy to see how society has changed from that of the past. We are more concerned with ourselves and in the process, lose a sense of meaning in our lives. Ware uses Jimmy Corrigan to symbolize the meaninglessness that McKibben speaks so urgently about. Until we lose this selfish outlook on life and lack of genuine communication, and focus more on humanity as a whole, society will continue its downward spiral towards the life of Jimmy Corrigan.

3 comments:

Giounit14 said...

Nice opening quote it really works. If there is a quote that can summarize McKibben's view on the selfishness of the youth, then use it. You mention nothing of Ware in your opening paragraph or thesis since he is a big part of this essay then you must mention him.

Why is the old sense of community and communication necessary to find meaning? They cant do it on the internet? Just explain how specifally and not in general how someone can find more meaning having strong communities like in the past. Also someone's meaning to life can be anything so technically it doesnt have to do deal with helping others.

What exactly do you mean by "human meaning" in paragraph 3. Other than that this paragraph was good althought the quote was a bit long.

You mention the continued cycle of meaningless. Use more examples to show each successive generation's meaningless.

Since you are trying to show the contrast between meaning in the past and now, then we need more examples from the past. YOur final paragraph summarizes it well and it is essential because I couldnt see what the sense of community has to do with the meaning of life. Until you said we should focus on humanity as a whole more, mention that earlier, and you really need examples from the past.

Nick Lubic said...

Nick Lubic
Dr. Adam Johns
Seminar in Composition
19 October 2008

Human Meaning

A famous US cartoonist, Charles Schulz, once said, “My life has no purpose, no direction, no aim, no meaning, and yet I'm happy. I can't figure it out. What am I doing right?”. What Schulz means when he says this is that, even though he is not getting very much accomplished and seems to be meaninglessly leading his life, he is still content. This individualized idea is a common thought in today’s society more specifically in the youth. Many think that it is fine to live a meaningless existence, as long as they are happy. Bill McKibben introduces his opinion on this subject in his book, Enough. He believes that today’s youth are more self centered and less communicative than the generations before them. Chris Ware gives a perfect example of McKibben’s ideas through his portrayal of Jimmy Corrigan. Perhaps, technology has increase the distance between an individual and his community. In general, people need to focus less on themselves as individual and more on humanity as a whole. Either way, I agree that modern society has lost the sense of meaning and community it once flourished in.

One way that it has done this is through the advancements in technology. McKibben would agree with me in saying that life before such advancements as telephones and computers was much more sociable. Although it is now much easier to communicate with the use of this technology, the “quality” of the communication is suffering. For instance, the house visits of the 1920’s are long gone, as people would much rather call someone on the phone than meet with them face to face. However, these basic interactions with others allow us to think differently and express views and communicate in a way that cannot be achieved through technology. It is not correct to say that communicating with others gives us meaning, but that communicating helps us to find our own personal meaning. The modern man is more prone to staying indoors in solitude watching TV, hindering his ability to find meaning in his life and to communicate with his peers. This is an unacceptable loss. Without these basic interactions, we have eliminated the very meaning of what it is to be human. It is our ability to communicate that separates us from all other species on earth. Of course, it would be ridiculous to propose eliminating these technologies, as they have provided us with immense opportunities and are a tribute to advancements in the past. Keeping intact the most basic modes of communication and interactions with our community is key in giving modern society a chance at finding meaning.

Chris Ware incorporates this meaninglessness in his graphic book, Jimmy Corrigan, where the premise of the comic deals with the absurdly meaningless life of a middle aged man named Jimmy. Ware uses his life as a metaphor for the corruption and meaninglessness of modern society. Throughout the comic, Jimmy is continually isolated from those around him, only truly communicating with his mother via the telephone. Additionally, Jimmy seems almost incapable of deriving his own opinion, adding to his overall hollowness. Ware often hints to modern society’s selfishness. He uses a conversation between Jimmy and a strange old man in the airport to display this. A newspaper displays several articles, with the main headline reading “Superman leaps to death” followed by a headline of an earthquake in China that killed 3 Americans, along with 4,000 Chinese. The man says, “4,000 Chinese people die in an earthquake but the headline tells us that three of our brave soldiers cap it instead. Nothing wrong with that though, right? … we’d rather read about some guy in panties falling off a building” (Ware 32). This passage is trying to explain to the reader that we as Americans are concerned more with ourselves than with humanity overall. In a previous generation, it is likely that superman jumping off of a building would not make the front page of the newspaper. It seems that people of the past cared about important issues, and not mindless headlines that are strictly for amusement. Ware is using this old man to portray his view, which is that society is becoming more individualized and less in touch with the community as a whole. He emphasizes that this way of thought is corrupting the minds of our youth, which concerns Ware as much as it does McKibben.

Ware also uses Jimmy as a character to symbolize this continuing cycle of meaninglessness. Like I mentioned before, Jimmy often has trouble formulating his own opinions. For instance, Jimmy has a conversation with a man named Jack at work. Jack tries to give Jimmy “advice” to help his relationship with women. Jack states, “Chicks don’t dig guys that are nice… Plus, you can’t ever let a chick know you like her until you have sex with her anyway” (Ware 14). Ware uses Jack, who cares only about his feelings, as a way of displaying selfishness, adding to the lack of community the author is getting at. In this case, Jimmy just sits and listens to the terrible advice Jack is giving him, displaying his lack of opinion and meaninglessness. It seems as if Jimmy Corrigan is either in a state of complete boredom or absolute panic, which inhibits his ability to communicate. This idea can be connected back to McKibben, when he mentions Csikszentmihalyi’s notion of “flow”. He defines flow as the area between boredom and anxiety in which we can all find meaning. Jimmy lacks this area of emotion and because of it, symbolizes loss of meaning in every sense.

It is easy to see how society has changed from that of the past. We are more concerned with ourselves and in the process, lose a sense of meaning in our lives. Ware uses Jimmy Corrigan to symbolize the meaninglessness that McKibben speaks so urgently about. Until we lose this selfish outlook on life and lack of genuine communication, and focus more on humanity as a whole, society will continue its downward spiral towards the life of Jimmy Corrigan.

Adam Johns said...

Giovanni - Nice comments, as always. Ideally I would have liked you to try to answer some of your own questions, especially in the 2nd paragraph.

Nick - While you were trying to move your introduction in a productive direction, I think it ended up pulling in several different directions at once - it's not clear to me how your thesis is derived from the disparate thoughts which precide it. The Schultz quote is great, but you need to cite things like that.

I'm not crazy about your second paragraph, which seems to rely on a number of broad generalizations. I don't necessarily think you're wrong, mind you - I just don't see anything here to convince a skeptic.

Where you really get going is in your analysis of the comic itself, which is detailed, thoughtful and interesting. Here's one line which really stood out to me:

"It seems as if Jimmy Corrigan is either in a state of complete boredom or absolute panic, which inhibits his ability to communicate."

This is a brilliant insight into the book, and a perfect way, as you then demonstrate, of connecting it to McKibben. Rather than flailing around for a couple paragraphs finding your bearings, you might have begun with this thought, and gradually connected to technological issues (through the phone, for instance, which you discuss well but briefly).

You really find your way in this paper, but you do so later than you ideally might -- this is potential 10 which doesn't make it because your structure doesn't measure up to your best ideas and writing.

Incidentally, you *never* change the content of a quote. The quote reads "until you fuck her," not "until you have sex with her." Don't worry about being offensive - worry about being accurate.