Lauren Dodds
Dr. John Adams
ENGCMP 0200- Seminar in Composition
26 August 2008
Dr. John Adams
ENGCMP 0200- Seminar in Composition
26 August 2008
Opportunities for Young Boys
Farmer Alfalfa is gifted in agriculture. When he grows his food he “keeps some of it for his family. He sells the rest to Grocer Cat in exchange for money” (Scarry 6), and he will sell the food to the rest of Busytown. Alfalfa uses both the food and the money from the food to support his family. However, he is also supporting the community by providing food, and the community will support Grocer Cat by buying the food from him. Alfalfa couldn’t sustain a living without Grocer Cat and vice versa. Hence, each character has a dependence on the other.
Sometimes an individual’s dependence on another’s occupation is more noticeable. Doctor Lion really helped Abby out when her tonsils were bad. Though Doctor Lion is paid big bucks for his skills at the operating table, he too needs to purchase food from the grocer and clothes from the tailor and once he has fulfilled his needs he can invest his money with the banker. All the characters are connected. When living in community with others, no individual or family has to be self-sufficient. When a person can focus on one aspect that he enjoys, he can excel in that area and the community will benefit more from that individual. If Doctor Lion had to grow all his own food and sew all his own clothes as well as removing tonsils, he would not be as skilled in medicine, his preferred area of expertise. We can’t do it all by ourselves. We need to rely on each other to help us out in areas that we aren’t strong.
However, young girls are not getting the same message as young boys are. Scarry’s idea of a traditional family stereotypes women. The females are depicted mostly as housewives. They take care of their children, cook, and clean. Grocer Cat rewarded his wife with a new dress because “she earned it by taking such good care of the house” (Scarry 8). Scarry hints at the idea that the man is the provider of the family, he is in charge of the money and he decides what he wants to spend it on. Females are very limited on the tasks they are responsible for. Mommy, the rabbit, takes Abby to the doctor and then has a baby. Mommy Pig made sure her kids were well feed.
Nurse Nelly is the only female depicted in this story that holds a paying position. This may have been accurate during the time the book was written but now this is far from the way things are. Women have become much more prominent in the community. They hold positions everywhere from nurses to CEOs of major businesses. Many women today are still considered subservient to men yet I believe women are the backbone of society. They have become a major contribution to the workforce. Women today have many more opportunities available to them. Not even 50 years ago women were expected to go to school yet still run the household. Today women are considered a more able body of the workforce. Most women in this day and age are expected to search for employment, not just marriage. This book illuminates the sexism of the time by giving many examples of men in the workplace but only showing one solitary woman. Although, the portrayal of Nurse Nelly is still sexist. Showing a woman in a nurse’s position shows the previously acceptable positions for women to achieve in society. If Nelly had been in a more masculine position the book would be more positive for young girls who read this book. Women need more positive male dominated roles in children’s books to give young girls a passion to attain more in life.
The sexism in this book is appalling. Major positions are held by only men and the author tends to put women in “their place”. Nurse Nelly is the only female character who is given her own passage, however, more women are shown in the beginning. These women include the laundress, the dance instructor, the music teacher, the realtor, the beautician, and the dress maker. All of these examples are not given more time than a picture and a label. The portrayal of these female characters shows the opinions and expectations of women 50 years ago. Women today have been able to assert themselves in the business world and are able to move past these stereotypes set in previous decades. More children’s books need positive role models for young girls to inspire them to succeed.
1 comment:
I’m not sure exactly what you’re saying about different time periods in the introduction - you’re drawing some kind of distinction between 1968 and today, but I’m honestly not sure exactly what it is. Other than that, it’s clear that this is an argument about sexism - but you didn’t need such a wordy introduction just to say that.
Your discussion of interdependence in Busytown is good, but I’m not at all sure *why* you’re doing it. Where is this going? Especially in a short paper, a reader should always be clear on what place every paragraph has in your larger argument or agenda.
Your discussion of the fact that the main job description for women in the book is “Mommy” is very important (note that there aren’t any unmarried women, or women with grown children, just as a starting point). This part is good.
The long paragraph about Nurse Nelly and our views vs. those during the time of the book is less articulate than it might be. You make various claims about how things are today and how things were in 1968 without backing any of them up - for instance, many women *did*, in fact, have jobs in 1968 (although less, and less well paid, than now), while many people would argue that there is still considerable sexism in the work world today (there are very, very, few women in the highest ranks of business, for instance). I’m not objecting to any of your views - I’m saying that you need to detail and justify them.
The last paragraph repeats the strengths and weaknesses of the whole paper - a clear condemnation of the sexism of the book mixed with a vague discussion of the differences between 1968 and now. (Some of my comments on a similar issue in Dana’s paper also apply to yours).
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