For every action there is an equal an opposite reaction. Although the
application of the laws of physical science to other realms of the human
experience should be approached with caution, Newton’s third law seems to
hold true when applied to technological advancement. Penicillin is
prescribed to cure bacterial diseases; antibiotic resistant strains of
bacteria evolve. Trains, cars, and planes drastically decrease
transportation time; the emissions produced cause pollution and global
warming. For every technological advancement, an obstacle is created,
whether it be ethical, physical, or simply the human desire of further
achievement. Despite these negative consequences, humanity also benefits
from technological achievement. Although humans would not suffer from
antibiotic resistant strains of bacteria had penicillin not been so
frequently prescribed during the 20th century, we would be suffering from
illnesses easily cured by these drugs. The robots described by Bill Joy
may be turn out to be dangerous, but they also hold immense positive
potential. Similar to Shelley’s Frankenstein, Joy inspires fear in the
reader by focusing on possible negative consequences of technology in the
future, but it must be noted that Frankenstein is a work of fiction, while
Joy’s essay is non-fiction. What the reader must realize is that the
technology that is the topic of Joy’s essay is not one hundred percent
evil. Though the monsters of both writings may seem entirely of a
destructive nature, Frankenstein’s creature is not made with the intent of
helping humanity while most of the technology that is the topic of Joy’s
essay is. The fact that Joy’s essay is conventionally non-fiction may
lead the reader to believe his fear for the fate of mankind is completely
legitimate, when in reality other factors must be considered.
Frankenstein voices legitimate concern in regard to the consequences of
the advancement of technology in a purely cynical sense, but considering
the technology discussed in Bill Joy’s essay, “Why the future doesn’t need
us,” would produce both positive and negative consequences for humanity,
his fear should be regarded with skepticism by the reader.
Victor Frankenstein creates his monster because of his passion for finding
the secret of life, not out of passion for developing solutions to
humanity’s problems; thus, he creates a purely destructive monster. As
shown by his isolation from his friends and family during his creation of
the monster, Frankenstein is oblivious to consequences his creature may
have on his fellow humans. Shelley is not attempting to create a
believable monster to inform her readers of an impending threat of
humanoid creatures made from bits of corpses, rather, she is warning her
readers of the possible negative consequences of technological advancement
when people proceed recklessly on their quest for knowledge. This fear is
absolutely legitimate. Certain scientific advancements have caused great
destruction because future consequences were not considered, or at least
not considered to a great extent. An example Bill Joy uses is the atomic
bombs dropped on Hiroshima and Nagasaki at the end of World War II.
Allied scientists worked furiously to beat the Axis nations in obtaining
nuclear weapons and then the American government made the hasty decision
to drop the bombs on Japan, rather than simply test the bombs to
demonstrate military power to the world. Many deeply regretted this
decision because of the massive life loss and subsequent arms race.
Frankenstein warns against this foolhardy quest for technology. By
reading this novel, the reader understands that the threat of negative
technological consequences is present, but also realizes that the
technology in this book is obviously entirely destructive, in contrast to
technology developed with the intent to aid humanity.
By understanding that Frankenstein is a fiction work, the reader can
understand that while Joy’s fear is founded, there are differences between
the technologies, and therefore the consequences of the technologies, in
the two essays. The technology of Joy’s essay, robotics, genetic
engineering, and nanotech, will have positive and negative consequences,
but this stands in stark contrast to the fictional destructive technology
of Shelley’s Frankenstein. The reader will understand by contrasting the
two writings that Joy’s non-fiction essay is biased against further
advancements in technology and that his fear must be regarded with
skepticism because he does not fully explore what positive consequences
may come about from technological development. He states humans are in
danger of becoming extinct if our pattern of technological advancement is
continued, but he fails to consider advancements that may lengthen our
lifespan or strengthen our bodies, which is why the reader should not be
completely convinced humans are to become extinct in the near future.
Tuesday, January 13, 2009
Unfounded Fear
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Here's just a few comments to get you started, since your partner hasn't posted anything for you.
Your introduction is well-written, although it also seems a little long-winded; your use of Newton's third law is nice, although it could be a little more compact.
While your claims about Frankenstein are interesting, are they correct? For instance, you do nothing to back up your claim that the monster is a purely destructive technology - Victor claims that he did intend to help humanity - there is material about this scattered through the 40s and 50s. Moreover, claiming the monster is purely destructive is far from obvious - take, for instance, his relationship with the De Lacey family.
The above comments apply, in fact, to the whole paper - you write clearly and effectively, and your ideas are fine, but you're not doing anything at all to detail them and defend them. On what basis do you claim that the monster is purely effective? Do you believe that GNR technologies will ultimately be beneficial, rather than ending in our extinction? If so, why?
In short: you need to focus your argument, and provide *evidence* for it.
Bailey Moorhead
Dr. Adam Johns
ENGCMP 0200
For every action there is an equal an opposite reaction. Although the application of the laws of physical science to other realms of the human experience should be approached with caution, Newton’s third law seems to hold true when applied to technological advancement. Penicillin is prescribed to cure bacterial diseases; antibiotic resistant strains of bacteria evolve. For every technological advancement, an obstacle is created, whether it be ethical, physical, or simply the human desire of further achievement. This law also holds true in Shelley’s Frankenstein. Victor Frankenstein discovers the secret to life, but in doing so unleashes a monster that destroys his life. Bill Joy is absolutely correct to predict negative consequences to the advancement of GNR technologies in his essay “Why the Future Doesn’t Need Us.” Despite these negative consequences, however, humanity also benefits from technological achievement. Just as humans have been helped greatly by penicillin despite the negative consequences, the GNR technologies described by Bill Joy have many positive uses in addition to negatives. While he does mention positive uses of GNR technology, such as increased crop yield through genetic engineering, he seems to think the consequences outweigh the positives and the advancement of this technology must come to a halt. He seems to think the modern world has innate “unquestioning acceptance” to the new, when we should be concerned about the rapid pace at which new technologies are being discovered (Joy). Unlike Frankenstein, today’s technology is pursued my groups of people aiming to benefit humanity, which should make the reader think twice before accepting Joy’s fear of GNR technology. Through analysis of Frankenstein, the reader is able to appreciate Bill Joy’s argument and understand that his fears are legitimate, but also realize that he exaggerates these fears because the technologies are pursued under different circumstances.
There are many similarities between the story of Frankenstein and the GNR technologies discussed in Bill Joy’s essay, which reinforce the fact that the pursuit of knowledge without regard for consequence leads to disaster. In Frankenstein, Victor Frankenstein feverishly works to discover the secret of life and apply it to a creation of his own. During this time he hardly pauses to notice the seasons passing, let alone predict what the consequences of his actions could be. By then ignoring the monster, he paves the way for disastrous consequences. Joy argues that by blindly pursuing knowledge, the modern world is making Frankenstein’s mistake. This fear is absolutely legitimate. Certain scientific advancements have caused great destruction because future consequences were not considered, or at least not considered to a great extent. An example Bill Joy uses is the atomic bombs dropped on Hiroshima and Nagasaki at the end of World War II. Allied scientists worked furiously to beat the Axis nations in obtaining nuclear weapons and then the American government made the hasty decision to drop the bombs on Japan, rather than simply test the bombs to demonstrate military power to the world. Many deeply regretted this decision because of the massive life loss and subsequent arms race. Frankenstein warns against this foolhardy quest for technology.
On the contrary, the circumstances under which each of these technologies, the secret of life in Frankenstein and the GNR technologies of the modern world, are pursued are extremely different. Though it can be argued Frankenstein thought he was advancing humanity by discovering the secret of life, he is notoriously good at deceiving himself, such as being unable to declare his “past conduct…blamable” at the end of his life (225). His motives were essentially selfish, as he wanted a “new species [to] bless [him] as its creator” and worked in complete solitude, sharing his research and secret with no one (46). Similar to a tyrant imposing its evil will on its subjects, Frankenstein unleashes his discovery on the world without a second opinion. Scientists involved in researching GNR technologies, on the other hand, are far from isolated. Groups of researches work together and results are shared with the scientific world. If an ethically questionable discovery is made, its merits and consequences will be subject to discussion by numerous scientists. Another difference from Frankenstein’s circumstance is the fact that many scientists could not pursue research selfishly even if they wanted to. Because funding for research projects is provided by universities and companies wishing to seek profit from discoveries made, scientists are generally only able research technologies which they are commissioned to research. Though profitability does not necessarily mean advancement of humanity, more often than not it does mean more positive consequences than negative are associated with the technologies researched. Because of the difference in circumstance modern scientists experience compared to Victor Frankenstein’s research, the reader can observe that certain negative consequences in Frankenstein can be avoided. Frankenstein helps us understand “Why the Future Doesn’t Need Us” by reiterating Joy’s fears of unrestrained technological advancement, but also the differences between the two show the reader that some of Joy’s fears may be unfounded.
Just a few quick comments on the revised version. The essential character of my original comments still holds - you are short on evidence here, mostly where Joy is concerned (your discussion of Frankenstein is pretty solid, actually). At the moment where you seem to be setting yourself up to explain why Joy is wrong (through the example of the atomic bomb), I don't actually see where/how you disagree with him - and that's the closest you come to being engaged with the actual details of his argument. That is, you seem to be questioning an abstracted, generalized, or even stereotyped version of Joy's argument - you aren't dealing, for instance, with the details of his concerns re: self-replication, for instance.
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